Thursday, April 15, 2010

Her Daddy Comments

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One man, , there since birth, ,
his heart beat, , her lullaby, ,
his smile, , her reward
her life, , his world
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Alyssa Lippi
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Shoshana Green 20 April 2010

She ain't alone...but then again, there are daddys and then there are Daddy's. Interesting feelings here expressed in a conditional sort of way. Thanks for inviting to read.*+*

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Darren Woods 18 April 2010

i really liked the opening lines to this poem. keep the good work coming! !

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