Tuesday, April 20, 2010

Her Bum Comments

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‘Does my bum look big in this? ’ She glared.
I gulped and stared upon the floor.
I must escape; the bedroom door
Was open. ‘Run! ’ my senses cried.
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Mark R Slaughter
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Royale Royale 21 June 2012

Awesome Mark R. Slaughter. If this ain't one of the cutest poems I've ever read... Delightful... I visualized the anguish expressions/body kinetic this poor fella had to conceal to keep this woman from releasing a tirade. The last sentence is so cute. Anymore like this?

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Amanda Simpson 29 November 2010

i really like this poem i have been trying to find a poem my man would like and i would just like to say after many poems read i have finally found the one thanks

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Mark R Slaughter

Mark R Slaughter

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