Her bright eyes stare at me; like a light switch she makes me glow. I fear that's all i can show. three words are never enough to describe a million feelings that grow.
I never thought I could smile until her bright eyes showed me how.
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I like ur poem! if you had used sentences more. The message would hav popped rit out even more. I love the way she 'dilates your pupils inflates your world.' The source your inspiration must definitely be something else.