Tuesday, July 10, 2012

Her Bright Eyes Comments

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Her bright eyes stare at me; like a light switch she makes me glow. I fear that's all i can show. three words are never enough to describe a million feelings that grow.

I never thought I could smile until her bright eyes showed me how.
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Ashley Morrell
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Mabel A 20 August 2012

I like ur poem! if you had used sentences more. The message would hav popped rit out even more. I love the way she 'dilates your pupils inflates your world.' The source your inspiration must definitely be something else.

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