Thursday, January 26, 2006

Her Body Print On Sand Comments

Rating: 5.0

Painted in evening colours,
The sky glowed,
In an array of orange shades
And the rays sparkled,
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Roopa Menon
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William Jackson 14 March 2006

Roopa, I like the crisp images expressed in your poem 'Her Body Print on Sand' and the way you stick up for her right to express herself completely in a world of men who shamefully may not value her opinion. I like the whole idea of a body print in the sand. We do not get much snow down here where I live, and so body prints in the sand are the closest we ever get to making snow angels.

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Martin A. Ramos 26 January 2006

Very visual, even sensual. Makes one think. Good work. Martin

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Nimal Dunuhinga 26 January 2006

Excellent! Roopa, regrets on the sand soon the waves take off? A very touching poem..................

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