Her Body... Comments

Beautiful poem, innovative presentation… top score

the body is beautiful if you know how to live within your body your poetry is lovely too as yourself know you nice to come across such lovely poetry ma'am read my moms smiles would you advance thanks

Aaarzoo ho Khawaashain hoN Agar poori no hoN To mun in k bhaar main Mara mara rehta hai

waqat har cheez ko badalta hai ko, badan ko, mohabbat ko, mun ko badalta hai ChotaiN khaatay khaatay hum booDay ho jaatay hain chotaiN badan ko, jaan ko, mohabbat ko lagti hain Phoolon ko kaato ya na kaato waqat aanay par murjha jaatay haiN

Awesome poem. Very deep and meaningful. Enjoyed thoroughly. Thanks for sharing.10+++