Saturday, August 25, 2007

Her Blue Jeans Comments

Rating: 5.0

Jeans pulled over slim legs,
then proud, wide hips,
the button's crisp snap
and she's ready
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Max Reif
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Dawn Fuzan 14 May 2014

Max, Wow I like this one, nice work

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Duncan Wyllie 29 August 2007

Wow! that is energy packed, a very confident young lady there! great lines though, thanks Max, Love duncan x

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Scarlett Treat 25 August 2007

I know for a fact that she had to lie on her back to zip those tight jeans, and someone, somewhere along her way that day said, 'Man, she must have been melted and POURED into those jeans! ' Business and pleasantries of the day? Monkey business, I suspect! ! Fun poem.

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