Her Best Friend Comments

Annoying isn't it that they can have control over a bit of your heart! I connect with all of your poems! And the lines in this one follow suit! Thank you!

40 oz to Freedom? Sublime?

this is excellent, it has a song-lyric quality to it which i really enjoyed. it reminds me of the song by The Descendants that Sublime covered, called Hope. You managed to convey the same emotion with simple observations that a lot of poets would OVER-write to convey. great! :)

So well written Ruby. Keep up the great work