Her Beautifulness. Comments

a very nice story in this poem enjoyed Alan

I am not sure if people are so meticulous, so elaborate and assiduous about their love. I beg apology to all my love as these lines go through me. Beautifull poem.

Another winner! I do so like your poems about love. They are some of your best.

Passionate teenage romance just out of a Mills & Boon volume. Sweet and captivating. Thanks a lot.

and looked out and pretended it was our bedroom and we had just married and oh you thought as she ran to the tree that she would always be here

I almost said this was an amazing story. Instead I realize this was a story told in an amazing style. Well deserved 'Poem of The Day'. Congrats! Awesomeness!

While reading I was lost... unsure if I were reading a prose or a poem. Wonderful work... incredible writing!

The sweet tug of innocence in childhood, the beauty of imagination, young love, dreams of life together in a romantic married of shared life possibilities.

A beautiful recollection of a beautiful time.10.

A lovely picture painted with words.

Amazing story poem envisioned marvelously and unfolded with warmth, love and tenderness. Heartiest Congrats on the Poem of the Day as also for composing such a lovely poem.10++ points.

Style of telling your story is amazing. A poem with a great flow and beauty. Loved it.

Wonderful! You have a real gift for telling a story, as I have seen in some of your other poems. Congratulations for having this one selected as member poem of the day!

ýou thought as she ran to the tree that she would always be here just the summer sun and she in her beautifulness and 13 year old me- - - - - - -She is certainly there in her beautifulness as you wished just like warmth of a summer sun all these years warming your heart all the while, springing as a verse from your pen..A lovely love poem, thanks for sharing.

Superb, Congrats for the poem of the day honor....deserve it Terry..10+++

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Enjoyed. I like your novel style, Terry

nice on Terry Collett

The joy of young love in a delightful reminiscence

She smiled at you! Nice piece of work.