Monday, June 9, 2008

Her Comments

Rating: 5.0

I love you
Oh god knows I do
This feeling you put me through
Euphoria long overdue
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Dereck Gibbs
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Greenwolfe 1962 10 June 2008

Zarabeth is right. There is a sadness her that is almost unspoken. Much more than we see.The writer is holding some pain. This actually reduces the poem for the reader. Though, I'm sure it suits the writer. GW62

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Zarabeth Pawlowski 09 June 2008

So much more upbeat than the rest but i can still taste and see the sadness behind it..

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