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I am a prisoner So taken by her That time itself seems to stop, At least for me, .......... superb loving poem; love is latent here in the heart of writer; the love is now in the sensitive tenderness; the love will awake to posses everything entirely/// from me 10+ for this beautiful poem

She is everything then, The sunrise and the sunset, All that I should ever want, Or need. her in deed u do young man at the beginning unrequited love is striking then once all starts is peeking all said and done sexy poem read mine some MOMS SMILES IF u haven't

A well written poem with powerful expression - - - 'Trying not to love, but being drawn into that attraction '

RE: Your Charlie Brown quote- - That little red-headed girl must have been giving him trouble again! You have written a fine poem, with a twist. Puts me in mind of the song by 10CC 'I'm not in love', where he's fighting and resisting it with all his might and being!

Nicely written verse, tracing the sentiment from aversion to attraction and love. Well done.

I do like your poem. Very, very much! I love its style, the way it flows and reaches so beautifully and naturally the reader's mind and heart with a charm hard to compare or find. And I love the way you have written the swinging, teasing love it shares.