Thursday, February 2, 2006

Her Comments

Rating: 5.0

Her tongue is fire is to my lips,
And her heart beats a different tune,
I follow her beautiful hair to her hips,
Though her eyes, capture me, like a rune,
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Trey Shipman L
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Neisha Williams 06 February 2006

This is an excellent poem, Trey. It is definitely and 'A.' It would have been nice to get this turned in on time though. Oh well, better late than zero. Great job and wonderful visuals!

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B Stokes 03 February 2006

That is REALLY good Trey! ! ! I'm amazed...You can write some really deep stuff. Must be because you're related to an English major huh? Hehehe...Wonder if she'll see this... But yeah, that was great dude.

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