I wish I would always be with you
But I don’t know if you wish that too
I don’t know what you wish anymore
Or maybe it’s her you wish for
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Great Rhymes and very deep on the emotional level. Overall a great peom
Dear Maria, I like the phrase 'Love is a word that connects two people together in one knot'. Avoid too much descriptions. Talk more with pictures and meanings, which will stay. Keep on with new themes and ideas. Find new ways. Thanks
'You always said that this knot was attached between me and you But now I realize that whatever you said to me was never really true.' This observation is so simple and so beautiful! 10 for it.
This poem is so beautiful because it shows all the emotion of what you're going through and how you feel which makes this so personal and special. I love it!