Thursday, April 14, 2011

Her... Comments

Rating: 3.5

I can never get my mind off her,
I wonder if she'd mind if i'd,
make her my own,
and never let her go,
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Jordan Moore
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Cheryl Tutaan 23 July 2019

A heart full of love...Thank you for sharing, John. ++++10 You would also visit my " My First Love" Cheryl♡

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Kirti Sharma 03 June 2014

nicely writn for the love.. :)

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Kirti Sharma 03 June 2014

nicely writn for the love.. :)

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Primrose Tee 05 May 2014

love love love love love

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Ambrosia A 03 June 2013

What a great love and lover. Hope one fine day someone tell me the same words.........I loved reading it.

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Zhaleh Hour 03 June 2013

just full of passion, thanks anyway I love it :)

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Jayne Davies 03 June 2013

Great poem! Well done!

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Nehemiah Cairo 17 May 2013

I just love the poem.

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izeah Dyson 10 May 2013

i love this poem her ur the best

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Jordon Moor 12 March 2013

very nice poem....very good

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Yusra Zia 02 February 2013

I Love the way yew define Love......gud carryon

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Ariel Farrell 18 October 2012

Iv loved this poem. I mesmerized it on the first day I saw it! :)

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Brando De La Cruz 09 October 2012

very good flow it was amazing

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Very cute :) i wish i could find a guy like that

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Nurain Ali-balogun 22 August 2012

Beautiful this is....

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Ephraim Chaparadza 19 June 2012

Very fantastic, i loved it!

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Manonton Dalan 03 June 2012

everything start with a dream and this is almost there.

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Lauren A 01 June 2012

Deep, nice poetry. Great job!

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Hunter Hunters 22 May 2012

Jordan, your work is nice, anyway hope you are married before doing all this.

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Wayne Smith 13 April 2012

hey man, great job. i like it

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