Monday, January 2, 2012

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the stationary hands arranged obliquely
in space, trying to hold the falling breath.
words, through porous fingers
clutching the web rolls down the faded red,
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subodh pandey
red
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Johnathan Juarez 28 May 2012

this is mystifying u got a seductive omniscient style all your own. keep writing and polishing it

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Farah Ilyas 21 January 2012

great poem....descriptive style, hidden meaning..............u done great job carry on..

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 14 January 2012

Yes keep it up.You are good.

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Alicia Meyers 02 January 2012

Very beautiful poem. Discriptive and breath taking. Very good write. (:

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Sajna Kailas 02 January 2012

wow, breath taking narration. I can see the feeling behind this poem and a A dedicated heart of a poet. nice one. keep it up friend! God Bless you! ! ! ! !

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