the stationary hands arranged obliquely
in space, trying to hold the falling breath.
words, through porous fingers
clutching the web rolls down the faded red,
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great poem....descriptive style, hidden meaning..............u done great job carry on..
Very beautiful poem. Discriptive and breath taking. Very good write. (:
wow, breath taking narration. I can see the feeling behind this poem and a A dedicated heart of a poet. nice one. keep it up friend! God Bless you! ! ! ! !
this is mystifying u got a seductive omniscient style all your own. keep writing and polishing it