Wednesday, July 1, 2009

****hence We Do So Comments

Rating: 4.4

My eyes are full of dream
Darling, that you know
Hence I am in love so…
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sarwar chowdhury
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Danny H 29 July 2009

This was BEAUTIFUl. and very very romantic shes lucky to have you fur.sure

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DaNa XxX 28 July 2009

very lovely poem...! ! ! n so romantic to..! i really enjoyed reading this poem.. ^_^...thanks for sharing DaNa...

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My eyes are full of dream Darling, that you know Hence I am in love so… ... it is quaite natuaral to express desire and make it known.. lovely attempt with sincere hope too...10 read mine miss i miss u, , anywhere.. butterflies around and love at first sight

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Josephine Dunn 18 July 2009

I like this - our touches theraputic - :)

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Christina Phan 16 July 2009

so romatic n sweet fanastice job 10+++

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Little Hatila ;) 15 July 2009

'My answer- I am created, I am selected, I am directed, You too……Hence we do so….' wow, very beautiful poem Sarwar....here is 10 for your nice work :) 10 Hataw

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Lily Law 13 July 2009

My answer- I am created, I am selected, I am directed, You too……Hence we do so…. I just love it... Simple but meaningful.... It makes you wonder as well... Thanks for sharing it ya... =]

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Catrina Heart 12 July 2009

Tenderly I touch…..let you know my kisses can chase away all of your fatigue and pain…..You are in heaven…We travel…We fly…. Our blood cells dance……Entwined we in deep….`Look how delights peep….Over and over…You wonder- how much love in you my dear! How you love so much! My answer- I am created, I am selected, I am directed, You too……Hence we do so…. a wonderful sensual piece written so carefully...with such alluring words that tickles the senses...10++++

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Smiley Hooker 12 July 2009

Artistically sensual and a delightful poem to read. very well done! : -)

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Ashraful Musaddeq 12 July 2009

'Silence beckons; Time smiles We drink love We sink in love.' Soft and green... excellent.10

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Linda Moore 10 July 2009

Very Lovely Poem, Thoughful, Romantic. To realize how flesh and Spirit mingle. Loved reading this poem......10

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Sarwar Chowdhury 10 July 2009

comment by Francis Duggan below- From: Francis Duggan (Australia ;) To: Sarwar Chowdhury Date Time: 7/10/2009 3: 54: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Hello Sarwar 'Hence We Do So', is an excellent poem as is all the poems you have written, the amount of votes and the comments you have received says it all about you, fine work indeed. F Duggan

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Kesav Easwaran 09 July 2009

'Silence beckons; Time smiles We drink love We sink in love'... good lines...sensually romantic...the formatting of words is really imaginative...depicts the 'sinking' process nicely! 10

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Sadiqullah Khan 09 July 2009

This is a love story told with exceptional passion, coming from your heart. May your love life floursh more.10++++++

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Josephine Dunn 08 July 2009

We drink love We sink in love. So true :) Lovely sentiments :)

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rago rago 08 July 2009

it is very nice to go thrugh the poem........... nicely written..........

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Ted M 07 July 2009

Nice content.10+++

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Saadat Tahir 07 July 2009

nice and up close...new format....a bit to the prose side...i'd say....bet done well cheers

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Ben Gieske 07 July 2009

Your choice of format makes it very interesting to read. You always give us something to think about; ex., 'glory to calamity that opens our vision! ' Your creativity in expression is a pleasure to read.

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Annika Park 07 July 2009

Beautifully written, it's so enjoying to keep reading such wonderful write. I'll read more of your work.

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sarwar chowdhury

sarwar chowdhury

Origin- Bangladesh, Living abroad.
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