Tuesday, February 4, 2020

Hen's Wings Comments

Rating: 5.0

A pair of blue wings is hovering
against the inky black covering
within ‘Little Fox' constellation
of Vulpecula designation,
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Harley White
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Bri Edwards 01 March 2020

p.s. your title and the photo were clinchers. :) bri

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Bri Edwards 01 March 2020

My knowledge of stars barely goes beyond the 'children's song': " Twinkle, Twinkle, Little Star" . I DID know our Sun is a star, ...or so i'm told. ;) Though your knowledge is light-years beyond me, i enjoyed the poem's stanza setup, rhyming, 'flow', and length. To MyPoemList & perhaps i'll share with others. bri :)

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Harley White 02 March 2020

Thank you very much for your interest and comments.

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Ronnie McGinn 04 February 2020

This poem generated a knowledge searching experience that reminds one of the beauty of the Universe and how little we know about it and how much we have to learn. It is a magnificent work of art that stirs the mind and the imagination!

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Harley White 04 February 2020

What a nice surprise to see this comment! Thank you so much for your high praise which is truly heartening!

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Kingsley Egbukole 04 February 2020

A very interesting and well composed poem

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Harley White 04 February 2020

Thanks very much! I appreciate that...

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