Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Sunday, May 3, 2009

Hen Laid Eggs Comments

Rating: 4.9

Hen laid an eggs, between legs two,
No small, no big but not in zoo,
Ran after those who made slight dig,
Dog, cat and crow planned very big,
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Gul naz 28 March 2010

'Alas! we could learn more and stop abusing' it has moral, wit and good rhyming scheme.......

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Aira Olayvar 08 January 2010

Whatta observation dear friend… in everything we are seeing, truly there is knowledge of wisdom within, and for every leaf that’s falling there is this something that it is teaching… even with the hens laying eggs…

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Terence Nabbs 18 October 2009

dear hasmukh I was never taught the facts of life I learnt myself.cracker terry

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Darshna Chopra 18 September 2009

Hen laid an eggs, between legs two, No small, no big but not in zoo, Ran after those who made slight dig,

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Umesh Lalvani 16 September 2009

Hen laid an eggs, between legs two, No small, no big but not in zoo, Ran after those who made slight dig, Dog, cat and crow planned very big, Hen laid eggs……

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Kashi Paul 29 August 2009

Ran after those who made slight dig, Dog, cat and crow planned very big, Hen laid eggs……

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lovely rhyming scheme.

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Radha Seth 24 August 2009

No crime is so heinous than rape, When caught in public then term it grape, What sort of society we plan to shape? ....10

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Saroj Davde 24 August 2009

lovely and real poem for kids....10

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Reshma Punjabi 24 August 2009

Hen laid an eggs, between legs two, No small, no big but not in zoo...good children poem....10

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Poonam Suthar 24 August 2009

Hen becomes heroin when find egg, With big noise run after with one leg, ....10

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Indani Narayan 14 August 2009

good poemfor kids....10

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Pami Panchal 13 August 2009

beautifuful poem for children...10

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Jigisha Vyas 09 August 2009

lovley poem meant for kids...10

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Sulochna Pandit 09 August 2009

good poem for children...10

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Saroj Davde 08 August 2009

inspiration poem for children...10

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Radha Seth 08 August 2009

rducative and thought provoking....10

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Kunwar Patel 08 August 2009

very good child poem....10

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Suwarna Patil 08 August 2009

beautiful child poem....10

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Kamli Kamal 07 August 2009

beautiful children poem....10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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