Wednesday, November 12, 2008

Helpless People Comments

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Ogling at the sky with tear filled eye
Seeking for some relief from everyday grief
Feeling so desperate with life becoming intricate
Staring at the steeple are helpless people
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Mittur Ramprasad
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Lizelle van der Walt 12 November 2008

Hello Mittur. I can really identify with what you are talking about in this poem. It really resonates with me. Please check out my poem Maybe-somedays. It also contains that theme of people that just try to hold on despite their brokenness. Please let me know what you think.

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