Helpless Flower Comments

A powerful and capturing write Vidyadhar! A pleasure indeed to read! ! *10*! ! Best wishes! Friend Thad

Once again, another beautiful work of art.

really really nice poem i enjoyed reading it every line was well written.....great job

God has made such plans that we have flowers blooming in allseasons and day and night. the fragrance of flowers that bloom at night reminds of their presence. a lovely poem with beautiful imagery.

Blind nights do miss the splendors and colors of the ‘flowers’ that bloom in nights... a story of the ‘other side’ of the world? ‘The day knowing well with greatness accepts the farce…’ A very deep line! Excellent write, vidyadhar! a ten...

The seductive power of this flower is short and intense. The poem brings out this in its intense imagery.

Very nice and concise piece.... The subject is one I personally connect with. A~D

nice and flowing rhyme, i love it

flows nicely, a joy to read. thanks for sharing! ! ! !

Again, another great poem. Although it was hard for me to understand. No offence.

Lovely 'Helpless Flower' surrendering herself to day and night, enjoying life to its fullest enchanting.

You paint a mood picture of some depth. Your last two lines are your best lines. Excellent write. As always, Sandra

Vidyadhar, Was it just me or was there something just a little bit sexy going on with that flower? B.V.A.

Vidyadhar, 'Other side of the world, night continues with another advance; ' It is surprising poems Which Differs air lyricism and sensitive metaphors... Tsira

wow.....im speechless..its beautiful!

Beautiful imagery! I just googled the flower and can see why you wrote such a beautiful poem! Gail