Helpless Flower Poem by Vidyadhar Durgekar

Helpless Flower

Rating: 5.0


At night.blossoms the cirrus flower,
Darkness can not see its pure splendors,
To please the darkness with its colour,
With lure & fear the flower surrenders,
Darkness relishes the sweetness of nectar;

Day waits to see the flower in its grace,
By the time darkness had kissed its face,
Knowing well with greatness accepts the farce,
Helps the clour and fragrance to spread and enhance,
Other side of the world, night continues with another advance;

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rani Turton 27 March 2008

The seductive power of this flower is short and intense. The poem brings out this in its intense imagery.

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DELETE ACCOUNT 26 March 2008

Very nice and concise piece.... The subject is one I personally connect with. A~D

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nice and flowing rhyme, i love it

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Coreena Dejesus 22 March 2008

flows nicely, a joy to read. thanks for sharing! ! ! !

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Jade DragonHeart 22 March 2008

Again, another great poem. Although it was hard for me to understand. No offence.

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Thad Wilk 12 July 2008

A powerful and capturing write Vidyadhar! A pleasure indeed to read! ! *10*! ! Best wishes! Friend Thad

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Dawn Slanker 05 July 2008

Once again, another beautiful work of art.

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Brandon Dugan 10 June 2008

really really nice poem i enjoyed reading it every line was well written.....great job

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Mamta Agarwal 06 June 2008

God has made such plans that we have flowers blooming in allseasons and day and night. the fragrance of flowers that bloom at night reminds of their presence. a lovely poem with beautiful imagery.

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Kesav Easwaran 16 May 2008

Blind nights do miss the splendors and colors of the ‘flowers’ that bloom in nights... a story of the ‘other side’ of the world? ‘The day knowing well with greatness accepts the farce…’ A very deep line! Excellent write, vidyadhar! a ten...

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