Friday, August 31, 2012

Helpless Comments

Rating: 5.0

So tender a flower, as the wind
blows against her.
The darkness of this world pulls
her down as she cries.
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Mark Normand
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Chris Zachariou 17 August 2014

Simple words sometimes express the deepest feelings so much better than any complex forms. I was moved by the sadness.

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Karen Sinclair 03 September 2012

Exceptional in its purity and wording... i truly adore this oh so compassionate piece... i read your personal write and this goes against what i was expecting, it is gentle and just lovely...tyvm karen

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Ashraful Musaddeq 31 August 2012

nice piece 10+++

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