Help Part 2 Comments

wow, i love it. very good. keep it up! this is fantastic!

when you become a spirit up above, you can only watch the ones you love. this continuation is great. so let's not delay, you have put the words where they should stay. in the minds of the readers. a ten

a ending so soft for a piece that began as began... but the life is just this way...forgiveness and peace post-mortem...for one like me having not soul, the loss of body means the loss of all, cause the mind lies on it.... to finish: you're brilliant

simple, yet, u took me 2 the event nice work this poem moved me, , , good work

Another captivating write, Tiffany. Intense, as was the first one. Richard

Very deep expressionate piece......Thank you for sharing......keep expressing Best of Health & Happiness Jon

help and help2, two captivating social poems, well done

such a sequel of story you made from the part one..and you narrated it here as well..

The reader is able to image what is happening with the words you have expressed in this write, thank you for sharing this piece with us. May peace and joy fill your heart each and everyday. Scott