Sunday, December 1, 2013

Help Me To Cross The Road Comments

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I am waiting for a friend
Who left me
In a shopping complex
which is new to me.
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sekharan pookkat
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Shahzia Batool 27 December 2013

there's a universal significance in all the write ups carrying the theme of waiting in the lines...the saviour / friend is on the other side of the road...with an uncertain existence... what depth in simplicity! My foot hesitate to move My white cane and its bell Lost in the crowd And help me to cross the road - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

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Charles Jagongo Ogola 03 December 2013

So true. I like this poem so much.

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Neela Nath Das 02 December 2013

A beautiful write again.

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Poetheart Morgan 01 December 2013

High anxiety! ! ! ! You are on the other side of the road and she is in front of you unachievable! ! ! ! Send a kiss to her and ask her for waiting for you. Very good poet, really! ! ! !

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