Monday, September 1, 2008

Help Me Stand Comments

Rating: 5.0

Help me stand on
My feet
Walk few steps then
Just leave
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Asif Baloch
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Melvin Banggollay 14 September 2008

a heartfelt manifestation of your deepest emotions as a truly passionate poet of our times. Great write take care, melvin

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Sathyanarayana M V S 13 September 2008

Terrific feelings...beautiful expressions........10

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 13 September 2008

This is a wonderful poem, Sir. Thanks for sharing it.

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Chitra - 07 September 2008

a strong plea to regain inner strength which is lost day in and day out

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Kesav Easwaran 06 September 2008

a good and sincere request to HIM who must heed...the line- Reborn.... is really good... poem short but beautifully insightful 10

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