Thursday, December 5, 2013

Help Me Comments

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stuck in this life I'm liven
to you, my heart I'm given
i stand an cry through the rain
please Lord rid me of this pain
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Cynthia Carpenter
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Khairul Ahsan 05 February 2014

'rid me lord of this sorrow let there be a brighter day tomorrow' What is your sorrow? Why do you seek darkness?

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Bright Morn 05 December 2013

may u get all what u want. nice poem keep writing

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Anil Kumar Panda 05 December 2013

very nice.but if you dont have pain you cant enjoy happiness.nice ink though.keep inking.

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Bright Morn 05 December 2013

may u get all what u want. nice poem keep writing

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Cynthia Carpenter

Cynthia Carpenter

jacksonville, flordia
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