Thursday, June 9, 2011

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Oh, Lord, take me away
Take me away this very day
I can’t stand the pain
Of my heart being slain
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Kalpana Bhatt 15 October 2016

Let not the hope die let a flame always be there

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Elena Sandu 25 July 2011

A fight between heart and mind I suppose.. Yes, it is true I get them too, but both comes to agree that duty cannot set me free..So for me it is just a prayer: please love stay in my heart and let me share..Keep hope you can always have the freedom of an open heart..May a lovely family come soon to be. Good poem filled with raw pain and hopes..isnt life so?

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