Tuesday, August 5, 2008

Help Me. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Help me appreciate love.
The commitment to care.
In the comfort-zone, where
Two hearts live life love would approve.
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Fay Slimm
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J Lee 15 August 2008

With love comes commitment With commitment there must be trust & no doubt If there's doubt there will be no peace You really do write very good poem tis going to my fav poems

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Marvin Brato 14 August 2008

Hold on to what makes you happy... live your life each day as if its your last by making the most out of it! Do not live in the past nor the future, live today because the moment is now! A 10.

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Susan Jarvis 13 August 2008

A prayer of heartfelt and beautiful words. S :)

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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