Sunday, May 14, 2006

Help Him, God (To M.) Comments

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Help him, God. I beg you for support
For the lost soul at the sad moment.
Give him some consolation and comfort,
And don’t let him experience this torment.
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Jolanta Gradowicz
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Meggie Gultiano 16 August 2007

a very touching piece, and a selfless plea for help..to the One who knows it all. thanks, Jolanta.. love and hugs, Meggie

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Claude Davis III 01 August 2006

Very nice, i have a similiar poem, but not as good as yours When people prayer its almost always for another, just like in your poem, its very caring, the first 3 words say it all. Good work Claude III

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Geoff Warden 14 May 2006

WOW what a heart felt moment prayer....... even if not ment for me I gladly agree.........

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Sandra Fowler 14 May 2006

What a passionate and heartfelt prayer. I feel empathy with your sadness. Warm regards, Sandra

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