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wow. u r a fantasic writer girl. keep it up!

for someone so young, you hold a smoking gun. very good write. a ten for your pen

i'm AMAZED! it's cruel and....beautiful!

Amazing.. This poem is so direct, so descriptive.. I could picture everything as I read.. Great write.. Takes alot of courage to write about something so sensitive...

a graphic narrative, vivid imagery, strong and direct to the point... in effect it's very affecting.

This is so powerful, something as sensitive as this must be very difficult to pen....this piece shows bravery, courage.....so much strength....thank you 10 Best of Health & Happiness Jon

Some of the things you say can be shortened, you over state some of the feelings. So much so that it's repetitive. Overall, I liked it.

RAPE - is a traumatic thing for a woman. It can last a life time. Your poem sort of presented it as a learning experience, except for the sock part. Rape is violent most of the time. That is part of the rapist pleasure the fight and excitement.

you revealed in your write the weakest point of a woman..although sickening..you pictured it very well with your compostion...

'There are some on this earth who deserve death.' -Nagourta

'There are some on this earth who deserve death.'

I cannot say that I enjoy reading poems like this, I don't. The crime of rape is such a dispicable act, but sadly, it is a fact of life. Your poem emphesizes some very strong emotions, fear, anger, shame, a feeling of utter helplessness. You have written a very good poem about a disgusting, perverse act... I give it a 10. Richard

Great work I like the part about the fear in the eyes really makes a lot of sense.. The beginning is nice also.. Great piece Tiffany KRISTA

perfect thts all i can say

GOOD LORD! ! ! ! ! ! This is scary! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! scary magnificent! ! ! ! ! The emotion is SOOOO strong! ! 10+ 10+ 10+ 10+! ! ! ! !

T his is amazing write i t portrays the demonic act f rying the victims to roast f ricking their souls with gruesome a gony induced by lust n othing else the victim/s can do but y earn to die to cease the pain!

gr8t write. I can only hope it is inspired by creativity.

Wow. I'm taken back. I'm actually speechless. Good write despite the demoralizing content. I pray this didn't actually happen to you.

Really does portray someones feelings when raped. Though I hope that didn't actually happen to you.

WOW! ! The imagery in this poem was so crazy. Definitely a 10.