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The resident doctor, first name seldom used,
Long forgotten in a place that threatened to consume.
Packed bags and on their way,
Nurses remember the Doctor's frays.
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John A'Hern
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Cigeng Zhang 09 March 2017

Elderly care is an important social problem. Our parents and the other old people are facing such a problem. What they really need is a place warm and happy to make them feel at home.Your poem is very insightful. I enjoyed reading it.

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John Ahern 10 March 2017

Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem, I agree with your comments.

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