Thursday, January 27, 2005

Hells Bells Comments

Rating: 3.8

Hells bells are ringing,
With a kiss I'm awake,
For you to utter the words that should not be said,
The awkward silence that follows tells you all.
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Joseph Tanner
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Raynette Eitel 10 June 2005

I had to smile at the image of hells bells ringing. This is a unique view of life, love, and waking up. Check line four for a typo. Raynette

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Nick Hilton 27 January 2005

Clever usage of the metaphor. Good last lines.

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