Hells 500miles Comments

misleading and tempting, makes the poem.very good.

Interesting and fine poem

the fighting spirit is strong indeed.. what's with the spelling? it his style there's no problem keep it up

Nice poem, i loved reading it but it was hard i think you should work on ur spelling

excellent never giving up is the key

that was really good im not even lying.i wish i wrote it

This is really good. Dark, and with a slight chance of hope. Keep writing.

that was good i can relate to where you are comming from in the poem.... the past is a hard thing to go back to and when it is always hitting you in the face it doesnt make the present life any better.... ~*Darkness Falls*~

this is interesting..I love poems that make you think :)

Good writing...the words flow well.