Sunday, August 5, 2007

Hello World Comments

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We start our lives as parasites
and selfishly take all we need
to satisfy our appetites
to mothers wants pay little heed
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 29 April 2008

i loved the rhymes........magnifico seniyor........bravo. your hello to the world is ambigous....but very clear statements.i'll read more of yours in times.

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Aine Ní Leidhin 28 November 2007

Beautifully descriptive - who on earth made mothers? Kind regards Aine

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Jennifer Perryman 26 August 2007

Beautiful, poetry A mother's love is the best. Magnificent poetry.....

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Sandra Fowler 05 August 2007

A tender word portrait of a mother's love. Every child in the world deserves this. Warm regards, Sandra

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Yu Ren 05 August 2007

gem, the mothers' deep love.i like it very much, that's ture.txxx

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