Hello, Saint Valentine - See Me - A Broken-Hearted Fellow: Part-2 Comments

The original sound...was written here, it could be a style that you make and belong to you, You done and held it together very well and that makes the whole poem really good..You really talented and yes, you have some messages here to spread, hope people noticed it :) Good things is to care, to care something can be done in words, and words beautify by poetry and you make this approach in nice way :) _Unwritten SOul

Wow, I love this poem, I'm fascinated by this amazing rhymes, , wow, excellent poetic depiction, , I can see the weeds of love here but written in your elegant style.. ((She is my glass of wine, no logic! And no magic! But love is all time tragic!))) Great poem, , , top marks 10++++

Oh, man you are rocking again and again with love poems like these. There is sorrow in the poem yet it is satire and comedy make it special. I like these lines....... 'There is a trend set by fellow poets...... Sing and dance and drink and sink to become idiots In the moments of saddest without any energy; So I too started with this mourning elegy; ' There is love; There is message not to love; There is comedy; There is satire. Anyway, I also like Morrow! Morrow! No tomorrow.......But borrow! Borrow! Only sorrow...... Best of luck with 10++++++ rating!