Friday, February 11, 2005

! Hello Ok Goodbye Comments

Rating: 2.1

She was so proud to have 'bagged' him -
he'd toured the world on Dad's business;
he'd 'squired'
(that's the word we use -
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Dulakshi Wakista 15 February 2010

You've expressed so nicely.Good work.

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Raynette Eitel 22 June 2005

I know who! (Tom Cruise and What's Her Name!) This poem was just so much fun, Michael. Thanks! Raynette

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Laura Cummings 02 March 2005

hmmm, i get that this is sorta storylike, but i had 2 read it through a couple of times, i like the other one better :)

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dissatified exmember 13 February 2005

Oh how well I understand. SShhh keep this a secret. During the height of my acting and Television/Film career I married 5 times. each lasted 2 years. AND we remained friends with all the ex'es. So I love this one as well. You draw me back to read your work constsntly. Bear Hugs Jan

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Michael Shepherd 11 February 2005

Funnily enough, Michael, that's what they both said to me when I interviewed them...separately. After all, one has one's moral worth to maintain...

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Lare Austin 11 February 2005

Hi Michael...this is beautifully written, my friend. Well composed. You are a very good story teller...excellent. Lare Austin

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Michael Philips 11 February 2005

This reads like a short story. I enjoyed reading it, Michael, but was sad that it had to end.

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