Friday, January 4, 2008

Hello New Year 2008. Comments

Rating: 4.8

two steps into my living room,
what promises have you
come with?
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samyak jain
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Vidi Writes 13 April 2008

If you predict the end A deceived one...at the beginning itself You may go un-noticed, the virtues around. Anyway belated Happy New Year.

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John Nightingale 04 January 2008

Unfortunately you are correct. Good poem though.

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