Hello, My Name Is Julie And Welcome To The Nuthouse! Comments

Very nice poem. I loved it. Thanks.

Very nice poem. I loved it.

Unusual and novel write - an interesting read. Enjoyed.

this reminds me of my youth when we used to loiter the street and promising each other never to leave.very nice.

@ david...lolz...ya happens... i am not @ jasmeen i too liked this line a lot, catchy and herat felt lovely... old times sake....painful finality is appended to it.. nice write

Feelings so natural expressed with an emotional pen...'my heart breaks/and it hurts while I wait'....message delivered? :)

A lovely poem clever & skillful. It reminds me when I took my girlfriend to Paris & proposed to her shd said no! We were however married a year later.