I'll say hello,
you'll turn away,
I'll cry hello,
and you'll turn and kiss his face.
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Love at first sight? Not at all times my dear, it needs two to tango. Maybe the other party doe not realized it sooner than you that love does exist, and it was only later upon knowing you better that he also relaized that such feeling did exist between the two of you. Love should be patience and understanding, forgiving and hoping. Regards. You got my 9 rating.
I really liked this poem and it gave me inspiration for another poem I did. 8/10