Thursday, August 1, 2013

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Hello I’m calling again,
on the door I’m waiting,
For the balcony seem to be done with me,
I’ll wait till dusk I promise.
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ckim mbasa
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Heather Wilkins 14 August 2013

you are a very patient person to wait and wait. this is very expressive

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Gajanan Mishra 01 August 2013

great write, thanks, go on.

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Ckim Mbasa 14 April 2015

Thanks alot @Gajanan

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Ckim Mbasa 14 April 2015

We really need to be patient @Heather

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Dave Walker 01 August 2013

A good poem, like it.

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Ckim Mbasa 14 April 2015

Thanks @Dave Walker

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