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I especially love the use of colors in the poem. Very beautiful, start to finish.: } 10! !

I like this tear of green sadness, so subtly visible in the ocean of blue life.wonderful poem...10+++

A beautiful poem with beautiful imagery. Amazing 10+

A very nice poem written in excellence...with a simple title though have a very deep mening and context...crafted with zeal...10+++

Your frog entrances, your use of color hypnotizes, your love of language is par excellence. Yes, indeed. Your poetry fascinates. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Absolutely stunning, I felt all the emotion, lovely poem.

Another great poem about a frog. Thanks for the comment on my frog poem.

If you wish the beloved not to loosen her pact keep hold of one end of the thread so that she may do the same

oh my goodness... this is wonderful. You have brought a tear to my eye. I can see the frog there by the bridge and your shadows. The words draw me in and I am living in another time and place. I am living and watching the frog. Blue can also turn to red then sorrowed no longer. Wonderfully written.

Many interesting images in this on Dr Kar and the final line gives it the true human touch. HG: -) xx

Hi, a well written poem. Some sense of humour in it. Liked it much. Take care.

You are always to be commended for your rich use of simile and metaphor. From your window on the world, you see images of amazing originality. Excellent, Dr. Kar. Giving you 10 is a pleasure. Warm regards, Sandra

a combination of fine perception and a strong theme 10+

a very, very good write!

Well written. Thanks for sharing your talent!

Wow! This is really good. Keep writing poetry, whatever you do! : -) All the best, Chelsea

this is the work of a professional: D, you really have a talent for poetry- nice one :)

Dr. this poem is pregnant with profoundity. But since you are a doctor it is not surprising because doctors usually deliver babies.But my word what a gient of a baby (poem) . Thanks. I gave it a ten. Please tell me about my poem 'I choose the mountain'

The sole beauty of this poem reflects how great its poet is. A master of his fate..reminds his fame..intertwined on the words this poet has chosen! A 10!

What an interesting and multi-faceted poem, with a slight twist at the end - wonderful work good Sir.