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Mohammad Jahoorul Islam carry on with these good poems...writings are real life...fresh like new winter vege....don't stop the pen...these are good advice too...these are good medicine...bless for all good utterances.... 10 hours ago · Unlike · 1

This poem is about dealing with aging. Mary LemingsLess than a minute ago You captured the feelings of inadequacy, disappointment, and disbelief of someone experiencing the aging process. This aging person struggles to understand where he belongs in life; he also struggles with others perceptions of him. It beautifully demonstrates the darker emotions felt by someone who no longer knows his place or importance in the world around him. Great job!

Contrast KR BALAKRISHNAN2 minutes ago The technique of contrast is used in this poem; and it has come marvelous. Comment 0 good

Alex Vic3 minutes ago Good

really good Yvonne Groover3 minutes ago kinda sad but beautifully written Comment +1

Aileen 'xz4 minutes ago Nice rhymes.. But it's too long Comment +1

repetitive and violent JoLene ToverLess than a minute ago I wish that poetry.com would give me positive and uplifting poems to review. I abhor violence and cannot like anything that makes references to it. I am sorry for this poet to have had the bad misfortune of having me rate this work.

I was fearless But now fear has taken over on face Tiredness is seen