Monday, May 4, 2020

Hello Darkness Comments

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Lying on my deathbed
Seriously ill.
Waiting for the final bell to ring.
The light in my senses
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Martin Greyford
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Dr Antony Theodore 06 May 2020

The curtains are being closed Like a comedian after his performance on stage. The bad part is that they are moving slowly. The final stanza of your good poem gives the clue....... the curtain is slowly closing. like the comdian, after playing our part. we leave.into God's hands. thank you dear Martin. God bless you..........

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Martin Greyford

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