Tuesday, July 17, 2012

Hello Dad... Dad? Comments

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hello dad, dad? Sorry to call you so late,
It's morning here. Where am I?
All I can tell you dad is that we are,
In Al Anbar privince Iraq.
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Juan Olivarez
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Smoky Hoss 24 July 2012

Not one bit of offence to me; in fact I'd say I too will pray for them. Great poem Juan.

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Valerie Dohren 17 July 2012

No offence here Juan, this is a truly wonderful and inspired piece of writing. Very moving, and brings home the iniquity of mans inhumanity to man.

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