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I think I went out with her once! ...Never have been that Lucky. Nice work with a nice twist in the tale.

As in real life, I winch at the recognition of what was before me. My eyes wide, my desire stirred, at the fore, only to cringe in spite of myself at the latter. Awesome job!

as a boy me self, i kom to realise that this fascinate me self.beauty piece alright.

I got really turned on until I read the last line. That will teach me! Andrew x

oh ho! too funny! I bet that de-flated their egos a bit! -chuck

Now this reminds me of the time when I was looking at someone through car window thinking of how wonderful they looked.They were walking down the street with long flowing hair and their back turned to me.As we drove past I realised it was a 'MAN! .'Oh how I squirmed.LOL.great write again from you Ernestine.Love Duncan

this is a really cute poem :)

With a repeated chorus this could be quite a risque country song, Ernestine!

Very funny. lol Even before the twist. It reminds me of some twisted nursery rhyme. Love it.

A great twist at the end of a very amusing poem. I could imagine it being used for the Carry On Films! Sincerely Daniel

such a surprising end..i loved it..very funny

A very complelling poem Ernestine. A nice twist at the end, which reminded me of the movie 'The Crying Game'.

Must have been a bit of a let-down! Very funny poem well written