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Words just don't do this piece any justice so I will simply say... **10** times **10** and **10** again! If anyone doesn't understand the power of this piece and they rank it anything less... Just come back to this comment wherein you'll find that my thoughts about each line and verse are multiples of perfection from beginning to end and this piece is to me a perpetual TEN Beautiful, Nate

want to count the moles on your face, breathe deeply the honey mint of your breath and then go off to sleep peacefully................ the thought eclectic cohered within love still flows by the bliss enshrined hello when not hollowed reed nodding its head to the high hill, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , hello.............let it not be hollowed, breath when smooches the smile, yet luscious green acrossthe lucidity ripples, , blue sky still welcome the moon , wellpenned,10+, thanks for sharing