Hell's Mouth. Comments

Excellent poetry - really one of the best. I read this a while ago, must have been busy at work & not had time to put thought to comment but remember thinking I am sure I went there as a girl - must ask me mum :) A huge bird flew down & caught a rabbit - poor little soul & my brother found a sheeps wool & wore it like a wig - scared me to death! We climbed down a very steep path & netted shrimps & cooked them in a pot on the pebbled beach - it was freezing... 'orrible wev ver' - but you brought back one of my best memories - thanx Fay :)

You take something of such horror and word it with such beauty so well done whippersnapper 10 Chris

Hells Bells, thats a great piece, so very well crafted. Perfect 10 Tom