Hell's Great Pain Comments

very vividly written. such wonders and thoughts I dnt think I have ever encountered.

very nice poem i like it alot

this is probably the best poem i have ever read. you touched on the subject with an unequaled talent. thanx

I wish to write as good as you you are of someone to look up too indeed. good poem, Bravo!

Another well-penned poem of deep thinking. I enjoy your work. Mark

nice stroy, not a bad poem

a great read from beginning to end I can't agree more with the concept you are conveying about afterlife thanks Greenwolfe

all in all this is one of my fav now i love it

I'm blown away... you seem to be quite an incredible poet. I like your style of writing... I wrote a short story recently in an old- fashioned classic writing style similar to yours. I was surprised by how much character it gave my story and how much I actually enjoyed writing in that fashion. For some reason it is nice to know that someone else in 'the now' enjoys it as much as I do.. (though I must say you are much better at it than I can ever hope to be for years to come.) I find this particular poem incredibly thought provoking and priceless with it's brilliantly terrifying imagery.

So this, in truth, is all we need To know of Hell's great pain. The knowledge of the love we'll lose And never know again. ................................................. This last stanzas the super - especial... The pain well operates over poets, whether not so, Wolfey .. 10....... Tsira

Isn't the message then to love hard and deep while here...the fear of loss, and the reward of something to come, cannot equal the love you felt here and now...it is not to be squandered...Coach

I amire your subtle craft with words - emotional but wonderfully tempered. Thank you.

why don't you go to hell I've been there.... so why are you back I didn't like what they were cooking

This must have been awesome for you feeling the love of God so powerfully. You described it all so well. Rhyme is always well received by me as it becomes so memorable. Karin Anderson

Your depiction of Hell is truly haunting... this affected me more than you know.

Really nicely done.10/10! ! ! !

This is a very beautiful poem... your words will stay forever in my heart. love it

Nicely write wonderful poem... Really like it

Nice poem.. the ending is great as well as the whole poem.. Daisy

''The savage pain endured in Hell Is yet more true and real, If you should ever feel the love That Heaven can reveal.'' the lines n ths stanza r the most ntertaining..there s a strong emotionwhom the author wnats to express..cheers