Monday, July 22, 2019

Hell's Fires Comments

Rating: 5.0

Everything seems to be
So diabolically ill, today!
Up-and-down and even sideways
Are the paths to hell,
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Sandra Feldman
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Bernard F. Asuncion 22 July 2019

The dark is about over, The dawn is about to break Surely, God will cast the devil and his followers into the lake of fire come judgment day.. Well composed, dear Ma’am Sandra...10+++

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Sandra Feldman 22 July 2019

Thank you, dear Jane, for your excellent view and words on this poem. In the last few days, a friend and I have been discussing, our evil times and " the end of the world as we know it" It is uncanny and so mysterious that you expressed the same thoughts! and felt so clearly what was being said in this poem. On a more poetic tone, loved your phrase 'sets the scene and lights the fire" .

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Jane Campion 22 July 2019

Wonderful poem. Sets the scene and lights the fire. We see dancing on the graves of the righteous. Actually, in my mind's eye the end of the world as we know it.

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Sandra Feldman 22 July 2019

I wrote a happier poem called " That Magic Touch" which I would like you very much to read" Thank you.

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