Wednesday, April 11, 2012

Hell's Feast Comments

Rating: 5.0

This Hell that I'm falling in, is ever so changing.
From a little spark in the darkness to the flames a raging.
The fire ever so high, I'm sinking fast in this darkness.
I look up to the sky and see the face of saving.
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Christopher Cariad
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Romeo Della Valle 11 April 2012

There is always light at the end of the tunnel, Chris! This, your first write clearly shows your deep feelings and potential in the Poetry World! You have made the first and best decision in your life in order to come out of that dark world you are living in! Congratulation and WELCOME to the Poetry World! Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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