Saturday, June 24, 2006

Hell`s Delight. Comments

Rating: 4.6

The world has burst assunder,
It`s fragments groung to dust,
Good swallowed up by evil
Purity rank with fust.
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Dee Daffodil 24 September 2007

...It's the end of the world...as we know it... Very scarey poem, because each and every one of us, can see the potential of this happening... The question seems to be...how long do we have? Hugs, Dee

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Tailor Bell 24 September 2006

excellent structure and flow, Archie. feelings of discontentment and defeat...in a compact strong work. -Tailor B.

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Scarlett Treat 19 September 2006

This has a sad, dismal ring to it. Is it a comment on the world today?

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Anong All 24 June 2006

I like the way this feelings when reading.... Thanks, Jodilee

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